Flightless Child
Enduring the endless night of its mother's near fatal labor,
it entered the world born breach, compromised, and
incapacitated by its unfound breath. Upon first sight,
the mortified mother limply lifted her cordless offspring
and caressed it to her breast. Despairingly she searched
for signs of warmth from its hard, vessel-like chest. But,
her first attempts were unsuccessful. Defeated, she gazed
into a vacant space which held no answers as to why her
newborn had been delivered to this earth in such a ghastly
disguise; taking form as a winged cocoon, a half deformed
butterfly. It was a sight to behold, this mother and child,
unlike any Da Vinci could ever fathom or recognize. But,
before her despair could fully set in, she suddenly felt the
beating of its heart from an untraceable place from within.
And thus, she began to feel strings tugging tightly to her
like a maternal vice. Although it was completely expressionless,
she discovered that this innocuous little creature had perfect
poise and a willingness to please, as it exuded intermittent
sensations of love and compassion; much like the savored
whiff of a newly uncorked fine wine. And as useless as this
moth-like torso would be in life: limb-less, blind and speechless,
with no ability to take flight; it symbolized a fortress, a
compensation for flightless dreams. And like the ugly child
only a mother could love, she loved hers just the same,
and made peace with all the rest.
it entered the world born breach, compromised, and
incapacitated by its unfound breath. Upon first sight,
the mortified mother limply lifted her cordless offspring
and caressed it to her breast. Despairingly she searched
for signs of warmth from its hard, vessel-like chest. But,
her first attempts were unsuccessful. Defeated, she gazed
into a vacant space which held no answers as to why her
newborn had been delivered to this earth in such a ghastly
disguise; taking form as a winged cocoon, a half deformed
butterfly. It was a sight to behold, this mother and child,
unlike any Da Vinci could ever fathom or recognize. But,
before her despair could fully set in, she suddenly felt the
beating of its heart from an untraceable place from within.
And thus, she began to feel strings tugging tightly to her
like a maternal vice. Although it was completely expressionless,
she discovered that this innocuous little creature had perfect
poise and a willingness to please, as it exuded intermittent
sensations of love and compassion; much like the savored
whiff of a newly uncorked fine wine. And as useless as this
moth-like torso would be in life: limb-less, blind and speechless,
with no ability to take flight; it symbolized a fortress, a
compensation for flightless dreams. And like the ugly child
only a mother could love, she loved hers just the same,
and made peace with all the rest.

10 Comments:
so much sadness and optimism
woven together to make this a powerful and positive piece
thank you
i must echo floots here... terrible and yet beautiful
A mother's sense of knowing is as strong and sure as life itself.
And thus, she began to feel strings tugging tightly to her like a maternal vice. Wise words that takes every mother back to their child's beginning.
Beautifully and tenderly delivered.
Thank you.
A wonderful piece, literally a tale of horrific fantasy. There is sonething of the David Lynch about the scenes you invoke Boulies.
In your final two lines you make even the ugly beautiful.
Floots,
Thank you so much feeling the yin/yang of this.
Polona,
I like your description... terrible/beautiful.. great!
Thank you!
sis Neetee,
Yes, both the maternal tugs of ones child to oneself, and also in this case, a symbolic, maternal love toward oneself even in the midst of broken dreams.
Thank you Sis, for your thoughtful and beautiful words.
Perfect V,
I'll never forget the first time I saw Eraserhead when it first came out. So shocking it changed film history. Who would think such a low budget black and white would have such impact. Of course then the rest is history for David Lynch. He is amazing!
Well I certainly consider it a compliment, you mentioning his name. Thank you so much!!! You've made my night. Now I'll go to sleep happy, but hope not to have a Lynch-like nightmare!!!
so much to feel in this , the tug of war of emotions .. teetering
Thank you....
Katie,
Thank you so very much for feeling the "tug of war of emotions...teetering" Well said!
Nothing stronger than a mother's love, no matter what the child lacks. Go in any children's hospital and these words echo off the walls in many forms. Excellent write!!
Pat,
Thank you so much for your poignant comment. Beautiful!
oh boy.
i cannot do this justice so i won't even try.
so sad. so powerful.
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